3.14.2008

no name

the clouds shed
so many tears
as i cry
for the women denied
the woman loved now

an opening
in the gray
is it the sun
or my heart

pouring love
everywhere

7 Comments:

Blogger jason evans said...

That imagery is perfect. The sun breaking through clouds always catches my breath.

8:16 AM  
Blogger mermaid said...

And I breathe again, grateful for such moments.

2:52 PM  
Blogger orgasmik said...

'Is it the sun or my heart pouring love everywhere'....this mermaid? where does she come from??
From where does she bring these beautiful songs??

4:35 PM  
Blogger orgasmik said...

Can i add you to my list??WOULD THAT BE OK??
Have a nice day.

3:05 AM  
Blogger mermaid said...

I must come from everywhere and nowhere.

9:41 AM  
Blogger Sandy said...

nicely written. hopes alive

9:56 AM  
Blogger EATING POETRY said...

Probably a little bit of both! As usual, the relaxed feeling of "Ahh..." overcomes me when reading your poetry.

6:52 PM  

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